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The Untold Love Story of Inanimate Objects: Part Four

well, let you know what I think.
I have to stop crying, first, and I don't think it's gonna happen anytime soon.

I didn't think it was possible for you to write a story that would move me more than your previous ones, but somehow you did.

I got sucked into it from the first lines, and I loved every single word of it.
every character had its own role, and played it superbly.

every action, every emotion, every ray of light was calculated and fitted perfectly the frame.

God, my fingers are actually trembling, you know.

the slow discovery of what really happened to Jared, Kyra, the boys' friends, Chris...but especially the rock and wave story.

I've always loved this kind of legends.
My favourites ones are a Brazillian one and a Spanish one.

The Spanish one is about a fisherman called Miguel and his lover Ana, who the sea was in love with.
The sea fought Miguel for Ana's heart, but Miguel refused to give it up, so the sea trapped him in its depth.
Ana kept waiting for Miguel's return on the shore, until she turned into a rock covered in salt and coral, because that's where he told her to wait.
The legend tells that every time there's a storm, it's actually Miguel fighting the sea trying to break free and go back to Ana.


The Brazillian one is about the sea and the moon.
The moon was living alone and sad in the sky, until one night she decided to look down at the Earth looking for love. Then the sea, cold and without affection, also tired of being alone, felt the silver gleam of the moon's eyes touch his waters and fell for the moon.
Since then, the light that bathes the night while the sun is sleeping shows how love overcomes it all.


look what you did to me, woman, you turned me into a bunch of sappiness and romantic clichés.
I couldn't be more thankful. <3

Thank you so much for your lovely review sweetheart. So glad you came back to read it, I was hoping it would be worth your time :) And thanks for the links to to the two legends. I adore these!! I made a very slight allusion to another of these legends in Shipwrecked as well - about the earth and sky being in love with each other but cursed to be apart for eternity heh. I do love my fairy tales and legends :)
cheers hon. Sorry for the really late response, I'm just a little detached from every fandom right now.

This was so beautifully done, loved the boys and definitely loved Kyra - I'm memming this straight away, what an awesome love story x x

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I'm really glad you enjoyed my bigbang submission hon, cheers :)

OMG! I just finished reading this (took me all afternoon) and I LOVED every minute of it. It was just amazing! I laughed and cried... sometimes at the same time... just wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Thank you so much for your awesome review!! :) I'm really glad and relieved to hear that you enjoyed it. Laughing and crying all at once is basically the ideal reaction any writer, professional or amateur like me, could hope for. So really, thank YOU!! :)

Edited at 2009-08-20 06:13 am (UTC)

-Is in love-

This is one of the greatest fanfics i have read in a long time!!! Every bit grabed me and woudnt let go, the stuggle, how they worked it out, the the therapist! All so amazing!

Keep up the amazing work!!!

Awww, thank you so very much for your kind words hon :) I'm really really glad and relieved that you liked my bigbang submission. Your review has totally made my day! :)

Wow, this was great. Compelling and emotional with good writing and a believable ofc! I loved it. It's one of those stories where you don't really know how to comment because you're still so in it, you know?

And I loved the waves and the rock metaphor. Beautiful.

Thanks so much for sharing this.

Thank YOU so much for reading and for your kind review! You do know how to comment hon - you just totally made my sucky day so so much better :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this story. cheers!! :)

Just an amazing Fic...you did an awesome job. I loved the way you portrayed the guys. Loved it from start to finsh. Thanks for sharing. :)

Thank YOU so much for reading and reviewing hon :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

Wow, your story blew me away, and I'm kicking myself for not finding the time to read it earlier.

I loved your Kyra (so much the fangirl trying not to squee) and I loved the boys, totally in love but unwilling to admit it to themselves let alone each other.

But, above all I LOVE the way you slowly eeked out the facts about what happened to Jared's hands. So that when the truth was revealed it was truly shocking. A brilliant story, brilliantly told.

Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words hon! I'm so glad you enjoyed my bigbang this year. Many people mistook Kyra for an OFC and I guess that turns some off heh. But I'm glad you gave her a try and liked her :)

I've had this book marked for a while, but just now got the time to read it and I absolutely LOVED it. I loved your Jensen and Jared and watching them struggle through this and ultimately come out stronger.

Thank you so much for coming back to read and also review this hon. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! cheers :)

Just finished this fic, this was a great read. I loved how you played us with the whole accident-that-wasn't-an-accident-at-all thing, I really didn't see that one coming!

It was nice to see Jensen realize a few things about his and Jared's relationship and I love his interraction with Kyra. She was a really lovely character!

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. I'm really glad you enjoyed this :)

That was amazing! Couldn't stop reading it and I think you captured them perfectly!

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

What a great fic! I loved it :) I bookmarked it a few months ago and for some reason, i didn't read it until a few hours ago. Kyra was awesome and J2 broke my heart. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much for coming back to this and reading!! So glad you enjoyed this fic :)

Yup, I just got around to reading this, and I have no idea now why it's taken me so long. Cause this? Was absolutely AWESOME :D
I loved your OC Kyra, she's just this side of perfect and ofcox the J's, what more can I say about them? *grins*
was kinda weird though to read Kane the Douchebag, since it's usually always Chad the Douchebag in this fandom. I like both guys, so it's kewl he's gonna be getting a second chance

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you got around to it and enjoyed it!! Yeah Chris usually doesn't play the bad guy but I guess in this situation it just ... um.. worked I think? Of course he will get a second chance, he will come around eventually :)

Oh, wow. I loved this to death. Just a perfect fic, all in all.
Great job on this. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. =]

Yayyy, thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. I'm really happy you like! :)

Wish you a happy holiday season!

Just finished reading.

Really didn't want the story to end.

Thank you for sharing :D

Hey there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) I'm very glad you enjoyed this. cheers and happy new year! :)

Somehow I must have missed this last summer. I've just found in a post at spnstoryfinders and loved it.

I really liked shifting from Jensen's to Kyra's pov. And Kyra was such a great character by the way. I also really liked that you only revealed what really happened to Jared in the last part. I was literally biting my nails wanting to know what these nut-jobs of girls die to him.

Great job!

Thank you so much for coming over and reading my bigbang 2009, gives me a lot of motivation to get down to writing bigbang 2010 hehe :) cheers!!