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Xmen: Logan (something's missing)
cyndrarae

X-men fic: In the Beginning (AU): Chapter 17

Previous chapters: One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven | Eight | Nine | Ten | Eleven | Twelve | Thirteen | Fourteen | Fifteen | Sixteen

A/N: Logan POV. The latter half is heavily derived from the movie, you might recognize some of the conversation he has with Charles.
 
For a guy with six metal claws and self-healing powers, I sure had a lot of phobias.Collapse )


Glee.

Wonderful to hear from you so soon, doll. Sorry I didn't comment on that last Dean/Sam post but I just could come up with anything more intelligible then 'guh.'

Any who, back to X-Men. Guh. xD Just kidding.

I'm really starting to love Marie, mostly because of how she interacts with Logan. It seems so natural and once she gets over the crush I can picture her seeing Logan as a slightly clueless but still lovable Dad. With Scott as the mama. Points for all the quotes!

Hehe.. i guess I would love to hear the "guh" too but its up to you :)

With Scott as the mama
ROFTL!! That's implied isn't it? ;)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing sweetie! I'm so glad you're enjoying this. *hugs*

*applaud*

To put it in words: He wear no shoeshine he got toe-jam football
He got monkey finger he shoot coca-cola
He say "I know you, you know me"
One thing I can tell you is you got to be free
COME TOGETHER, RIGHT NOW. OVER ME.

THANKS! I think :P *hugs*

Love it and can't wait for more.
Thanks a lot for this :D

Thank you!! :) I'll try to update soon, cheers.

“She’s a telepath too.”

Freakin’ Jesus.
made me laugh so much! I love how you do Logan, it's so lovely. Jean's more of a bitch than ever, and I never liked her in the first place.

:D Yep just Logan's luck to be surrounded by telepaths heh. And poor Jean's just trying to cling to a man that doesn't belong to her anymore heh. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing hon. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

That second to the last line where Logan said, 'my boy'=yummy yum yum.

I'm sad that Scott is still unconscious though. I'd love to see how he'd react to Jean and Logan fighting over him, then Logan turning up the flirtation and the UST, and so forth :D

:D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. Scott needs his rest for now heh, but he will be joining the world of the wide awake pretty soon (and hoping he hadn't hehe :P)

I have just read every single chapter in very quick succession, my eyes hurt, I'm desperate to go to bed but oh wow, i loved every second. What an amazing story so far! Love, love, love protective Wolverine. Hope to read more soon.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it hon. Will try to update soon! *resumes writing*

This sotry is gettitng better and better! Someone is in love, ha.

Thanks!! Yep.. Logan is finally getting with the program heh ;P

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Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Amazing! I'm so glad you've decided to start up this series again. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm glad you're enjoying this hon :) Unfortunately RL's got in the way and I am unable to update just yet. I hope you don't give up on me tho and keep reading! cheers hon.

More? Please?? You make me like Marie in spite of myself (cause she's a bit of a Mary Sue in the movies, no?) and OMG - your Logan is to die for! Your Logan with Jean is to die for!! And your Scott, even unconscientious, is so vulnerable and brave... I can't wait for more hon, do hurry? Pleeeaasse?

Heh thank you sweetie :) I will try to update this soon as I can hon. The next chapter was almost done before I got attacked by the Leeds news and my rising obsession with Taylor Kitsch at once hehe ;P But since it's you being so sweet to me ;P I will definitely try! :) *hugs*

Your characterizations are so well done! And Logan--even with Scott out of the picture, you do such a great job of developing their relationship! Bravo!

Thank you thank you so so much!!! *clings* :)

Hi:

I'm reading your x-men fics since days ago, and I found it cool.

I hope your inspiration continue flowing. :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing hon :) I'm really glad you've enjoyed my x-men stories. Hope RL stops being a bitch to me so I can get back to writing soon :) cheers!

Loved this chapter. As I was reading the last chapter with Marie, I really enjoyed it, but I have to admit my favorite POV is Logan's or Scott's. :) Poor Logan, being all protective and worried even though he really doesn't want to be. I loved the tension between him and Jean over Scott. And I loved that Charles told Logan about Scott's past. Then when Logan asks why, Charles' answer of 'I think you know' is perfect. And I loved Logan being all excited to kick some ass to avenge 'his' Scott. :) Great storyline.

Heh yeah, Logan was conflicted so far, but he is still starting to see things more clearly. As he finds out more and more about Scott, his respect grows for the boy and so does his.. ahem.. love ;) And that's what Charles can already see in his mind which is why he is trusting his only son with this stranger.

Glad you're enjoying this hon. Thanks again! :)


Turning Wolverine's past, partially remembered experience with doctors and tests into an instinctual distrust of Jean is excellent and very rational for the character.

Even when he knows Jean doesn't want him there, Logan stubbornly doesn't back down. Knowing it actually makes him dig his heels in further.

I really like that Jean stands up to him, despite his intimidation. She is a very strong woman.

I also like Logan's introduction to Charles much better here, as opposed to the mind games he plays in the movie.

While many things about the movies annoy me, I do enjoy the interactions of Scott and Xavier, the powerful telepathic father to his handicapped but capable son. Having Logan notice the personality traits that Scott takes from Xavier is very reminiscent of their relationship.

"For over a year, a man named Jack Winters who’d somehow caught hold of his juvenile record, blackmailed him and forced him into prostitution. What was a blind kid to do?"

I'm not sure Charles would admit this to a man he doesn't know. He could imply it, and Logan is smart enough to figure it out, as "And he did whatever he had to in order to survive." pretty much says it right there.

“She’s a telepath too.”

She's a telepath as well? It seems more to Xavier's speech patterns.

Xavier is trusting Logan with a lot in your story, which goes a long way to building trust and possibly winning him over.

Finally made time to read this, and was not disappointed. Actually it's a real testament to your writing that I enjoyed the chapter as much as I did considering Scott was sleeping the whole time! Can't wait for more...

Thanks so much sweetie. I am wondering if you read the next 2 chapters after this but I'm guessing you must have. So glad you're enjoying this :)