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cyndrarae

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cyndrarae

J2 RPS fic: Won't let Texas come in the way (2/2)

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PART – 2: Eight months later (Jensen)

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I hate that it's taken me this long to comment on your wonderful story.

I've started to leave feedback a couple of times but have failed miserably each time! I'm placing the blame on the fact that of late I've started to feel socially inept, as I'm hardly able to get out to meet/talk to people or even chat on-line these days and as daft as it sounds, it's like you forget how to communicate...there's definitely some truth to the adage 'use it or lose it'!

I always love the way you write J2 & Dean/Sam, you get their emotions & voices spot on and Texas had all that and more.

I loved the build up and how in amongst the eventual schmoopy domestic bliss there was, that angsty element of heartbreak...especially when Jared was curled up on Jensen's bed.

I loved how you made me question whom I felt most sorrier for, during the scenes of those initial hand jobs...for me there was a sadness akin to loveless 'one night stands' or 'sex with strangers'.

All in all it was a beautifully written piece, that I plan on re-reading again soon.

Many thanks for sharing x


Hey you! :) Thank you so much for leaving me this beautiful comment darling.. I was hoping you'd have read and enjoyed this :) *huggles*

I can only imagine how its like for you over there. But i do think you should socialize more, either in person or on the phone or online.. gossip keeps life interesting it does hehe ;)

Take care sweetie!! :)

*sigh* Amazing and sooo well-written story! Loved the slow build up, especially Jared's conflicted emotions about the whole thing. So sweet and tender in so many ways, this slow discovery of theirs. Just loved it:P Thank you so much for sharing*g*

Aww thank YOU so much for reading and reviewing hon :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! :)

I just found this. It's the first fic I've read in a really long time. It kept me fixed to the page. I could so see the boy's 'first time' like that.

Excellent read.

Z

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing sweetie :) I know what you mean.. haven't been able to read much myself of late, but I'm really glad you made time for this one and enjoyed it :) *hugs*

I saw this rec'd on ou_peachus page and thought it sounded interesting and I am so glad I followed the link!! This is how I imagine they "really" are, if you know what I mean (I am sure you do). I really enjoyed this. A lot.

Thank you so much hon ;) ou_peachus is very kind to me, and thank you for your lovely feedback too! I'm really glad you enjoyed this :)

I heart this story. Lots.

I love Jared as the occasional bottom.

Beautiful start to the story. Really enjoyed the steady progression.

All around excellent!


Thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it hon. Oh and um.. Jared always bottoms in my stories actually, that's just how I picture them and I know I'm in the minority but hey.. just an FYI :D:D

That was fun, I enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :) Glad you liked!

cute and angsty. I liked Jared freaking out about how he views himself, because yeah, it's got to be confusing. Also when Jensen snapped and said everything he'd love to do to Jared it was freaking hot!!
Great story!

Thanks!! AGAIN!! :) All's well that ends well, identity crisis and all huh :)

*aw*

That was wonderful, really enjoyed it ♥ Thanks so much for writing and sharing :D

Thank YOU for reading and reviewing hon! :) SO glad you enjoyed this.. cheers :)

So far I've read three of your fics. And I love love love how Jensen takes care of Jared in each one, sigh...
Also the little things you add in each fic, some habits or scenes which are so easy to imagine as being real. Like in this one, Jared discovering that Jensen's trained Harley to fetch him a beer, so brilliant!

Hello again! Thanks so much for giving my fics a go :) So glad you enjoyed what you read so far. Yep Jensen taking care of Jared (and Dean taking care of Sam) is a massive kink of mine. I often go to unrealistic lengths just to make it happen hehe. Hey it's fan fiction for a reason right? ;-)

Thanks again so much!! Hope you find something else to your liking while you're here..