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cyndrarae

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Shipwrecked - Jensen - 2
cyndrarae

Bigbang (J2 AU): Shipwrecked.. Epilogue


Hun, I've just read this once more (how many times I've read it already? 10? 20?) and I wanted to tell you, once more, how much I love it <3

Oh Jesus I am so horrifically late in responding to this hon, so sorry!!! But yeah, I'm so glad there is repeat value in this product hehe.. thanks so much for your lovely note. It's making my day now, in March 2011. four months after you intended it *winces*.. but thank you so so much!! *hugs*

How're you doing hon? Are you writing for bigbang this year?

that was a beautiful story!! when i read summary i imagine that this is where it would end up! definitely had me reading the whole story waaay past my bedtime. the angst, sex, the twists and turns. it was perfect!!!

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this...

excellent fic! I loved everything about the way you developed the two characters and their relationships. I liked how Jared first made it sound like he was drinking that night, when actually he just blamed himself. I liked their imperfections and flaws and the way they were drawn together, even when they didn't mean to be.
The technique where you would have a scene in Jared's pov, and then afterward the conversation between other people that lead up to the scene was interesting. It allowed me to learn more about what the other characters were thinking without ruining the experiencing it as through Jared's eyes. Although, I'll admit this first time one threw me in a wait, didn't this happen already? But once I read enough to figure out what was going on I liked it.
This was a great story I enjoyed reading a lot. Thanks for sharing it!

Yeah the technique is not original in any way hehe, and its really hard to write and takes some getting used to. But I'm so glad it worked for you hon. Thanks so very much for reading and dropping me such a lovely comment about it :)

I've just found this via a post on spnstoryfinders. I loved the story. You made me smile, you made me cry, and it had a lovely feelgood factor about it.

I liked the flashback scenes -- I thought they worked well in the story. Thanks for sharing :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) So glad you enjoyed it, and especially that the flashback method worked for you!! ;)

cheers hon, Cyndra

This was a lovely, touching, sad, happy and very sexy story.
I was sucked in from the very first word and I could not budge from my computer until I was done. I'm very happy that I came across this story after it was completed because it would have been torture waiting for an update.

Thanks for sharing,
Claire

Hey there.. sorry for the late response. But thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! :) I'm very glad you enjoyed this :)

wow this adorable.love jared hooker

Hehe.. glad you enjoyed this! Thanks so much for reading :)

This is so well written and flows so beautifully once I started reading I couldn't stop.

I love how you did the unexpected and had Jensen controlling the action when Jared was supposed to be doing the entrapment, and how Jared was honest while acting with dishonest intent - such lovely shades of intriguing grey.

A great read that made me tear up in the epilogue and I REALLY didn't want it to finish.

Thank you so much!!! I like to play in the grey area more often than not, I think imperfect characters are infinitely more interesting :) SO glad you enjoyed reading this, thank you :)

I love this story

Thank you - it's great!

M

Thank you so much!!! And sorry for such a late response, RL's been a bitch a lately. Glad you enjoyed, cheers :)

Oh man, so many emotions. Jensen knowing (but not really knowing) from the get go about the job Jared was suppose to carry out really hit me hard. It added a whole other dynamic to your story that I loooved! Your writing just flows and I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Thank you so very much for reading and for your lovely comment!! So glad you enjoyed this story, I've never spent more time writing anything else in my life hehe. cheers!! :)


This was incredible. Loved ruthless tycoon/geeky joyful teenager Jensen. Tortured, hooker-with-a-heart-of-gold Jared was so sweet. Wonderful ending!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And apologies for my tardy response - I haven't been on LJ all that much lately. So glad you enjoyed this, cheers! :)

PS: OMG I just realized I'm a whole YEAR late!! I'm so SO VERY SORRY, I'm a total idiot, so sorry again, really.. *headdesk*

Edited at 2013-07-27 03:54 am (UTC)

Beautiful story! I loved it! Thank you so so much:)

OMG I'm so sorry I didn't see this comment until now!! Please accept my apologies, I'm a total idiot!! And thank YOU so SO much for reading and commenting.. once again, just, gah I'm just so sorry..

This was such an awesome story! I am so glad to discover it and spent the last couple hours reading it.

I loved the writing and the imagery of how you wrote these two men - both physically and their mannerisms and characteristics. The epilogue was awesome - I loved Alan's parents being there!

Hi there! First of all, I'm so very sorry for my incredibly late response. You were so kind to read my story and let me know what you thought about it. But the complete idiot that I am.. I completely missed this :( I'm so very sorry and.. gah, just, well, thank you? :) So glad you liked the epilogue btw.. that was such a bitch to write. I kept thinking it wasn't needed and that it was too pretty a bow to tie up loose ends you know heh.. anyway. So sorry, again!!

I think you did an amazing job on this story.

Thank you so much! Really glad you read and enjoyed this :)

I really like the way your wrote this. The flashbacks, etc. It was emotional and I really got teary-eyed several times. A really good read!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! So glad you enjoyed this. Teary-eyed really? :) That's the best compliment I could hope for.. thank you!!

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Aww, thank you sweetie! This is a such an old story, I'm glad you still chose to read it :)

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