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cyndrarae

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cyndrarae

Beta Needed for Hot Showers - Help?

Hey f-list,

So I was going to post one more chapter and an epilogue for "Of Hot Showers and Female Intuitions". But now it looks like its going to be 2 chapters and an epilogue *grins sheepishly*. Here's the thing - I promised myself that next time I post, I would wrap up the series. I have the 2 chapters down, still working on the epilogue. Now my usual betas are unavailable. So am looking for someone to look over these 2 chapters? This is what I need..

1. Someone who can Americanize my "British writing" :) This is very important.
2. Look over grammar and spelling mistakes
3. Give me feedback on whether this sounds like an accurate Dean POV or not, and if not what's missing.
4. Just, gah... an honest unbiased opinion. If you think it's believable or not, if I'm rambling or not giving enough detail or too much detail.. anything :) Just an honest opinion.
5. Finally, of course I need someone who's been following the series so they know what's going on.

Not too much to ask is it? :D Pls drop me a mail at cyndrarae @ yahoo.com if you're interested and have the time? Just looking for 2 sets of eyes so will go with the first two volunteers. *prays* Thanks a lot in advance! :)

cheers, Cyndra


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Oh gods... the crack. The crack!

Yes! Agnostic's ftw! Ah, religious isn't really an 'open topic' in my house. My mother and her family are all hardcore Christians and my dad's an atheist. So I was pretty much left to fend for myself in the religious department.

I discovered that after I sent this. :P Oh Dean, you ragamuffin. I've almost had enough of your tomfoolery. <3 *wipes brow* And I was almost worried he'd spill the beans to John! But no. The epiphany was had and now Dean's like a Geek in Love. Hee~!

I'm sorry, I honestly don't understand how Dean or Sam could forgive him. At the same time I somehow am able to think that Sam's like a petulant child when he fights with John, but I'd never be able to forgive him for what he did to his children. Yes he tried to be a good father, but no matter what children always come first. Hell. Family always comes first. Dean-o's got the right idea.

Yup it's his fault the boys are in love. Dean's easy to rationalize, for him it was always Sammy, Sammy, Sammy. (You can so see him brushing off the hurt in the first ep :P) Sam's a bit trickier and no matter how fandom portrays it I think John's still to much in love with Mary to ever screw around with her kids. Cheesy as it may be, Mary was his one true love.

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