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Beta Needed for Hot Showers - Help?

Hey f-list,

So I was going to post one more chapter and an epilogue for "Of Hot Showers and Female Intuitions". But now it looks like its going to be 2 chapters and an epilogue *grins sheepishly*. Here's the thing - I promised myself that next time I post, I would wrap up the series. I have the 2 chapters down, still working on the epilogue. Now my usual betas are unavailable. So am looking for someone to look over these 2 chapters? This is what I need..

1. Someone who can Americanize my "British writing" :) This is very important.
2. Look over grammar and spelling mistakes
3. Give me feedback on whether this sounds like an accurate Dean POV or not, and if not what's missing.
4. Just, gah... an honest unbiased opinion. If you think it's believable or not, if I'm rambling or not giving enough detail or too much detail.. anything :) Just an honest opinion.
5. Finally, of course I need someone who's been following the series so they know what's going on.

Not too much to ask is it? :D Pls drop me a mail at cyndrarae @ yahoo.com if you're interested and have the time? Just looking for 2 sets of eyes so will go with the first two volunteers. *prays* Thanks a lot in advance! :)

cheers, Cyndra

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hey you :) Thanks sweetheart, I got chapter 14 betaed and posted :D But i might need your help for the next ones that I'm still working on. Can I send them to you at your email address on your profile? Do let me know hon, and cheers again!! *hugs* :)


Ok, I'm really nervous, but if you can't get anyone else I'll give it a try. Just remember, I've never done this before, so you're going to have to, like, draw me a map of how it's done. Hee!

Rock on!

Draw map. check :D I don't know if you've read chapt 14 yet hon, let me know when you do. So I can send you the next parts. All you have to do is read it over and tell me if there's any part in there that sounds overly British or not American. That's it! :) What say? :)


I went and read the whole story and I love, love, LOVE IT! I knew I would, I just don't do well with WIP's.

So if you need me, I'm ready, babe! (I think) ;)


Yayy thanks sweetie! I've sent you the next chapter.. pls don't make me wait too much haha ;P Thanks again!! *huggles*

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