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Beta Needed for Hot Showers - Help?

Hey f-list,

So I was going to post one more chapter and an epilogue for "Of Hot Showers and Female Intuitions". But now it looks like its going to be 2 chapters and an epilogue *grins sheepishly*. Here's the thing - I promised myself that next time I post, I would wrap up the series. I have the 2 chapters down, still working on the epilogue. Now my usual betas are unavailable. So am looking for someone to look over these 2 chapters? This is what I need..

1. Someone who can Americanize my "British writing" :) This is very important.
2. Look over grammar and spelling mistakes
3. Give me feedback on whether this sounds like an accurate Dean POV or not, and if not what's missing.
4. Just, gah... an honest unbiased opinion. If you think it's believable or not, if I'm rambling or not giving enough detail or too much detail.. anything :) Just an honest opinion.
5. Finally, of course I need someone who's been following the series so they know what's going on.

Not too much to ask is it? :D Pls drop me a mail at cyndrarae @ yahoo.com if you're interested and have the time? Just looking for 2 sets of eyes so will go with the first two volunteers. *prays* Thanks a lot in advance! :)

cheers, Cyndra

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Haha!! ;) Okay I'm sorry :D j2bigbang ahem.. so there are 2 possible plots and I haven't decided which one to go with yet (see how late things are becos of hot showers, haha). In a nutshell these are the ideas..
1) Jared is a 25 year old virgin who asks Jensen to help him pop his cherry LMAO :D
2) Jared is a male stripper at a club where Jensen visits. And while Jared over time falls in love with Jensen, but Jensen never pays attention him.

What do you think? :)

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LOL! Relax dude.. I haven't even started yet and you're giving me more ideas! :D Pls do wish me luck so I can finish Hot Showers in March for sure and start this on April 1st. I have to submit it on the 1st of May - its a mandatory deadline *sighs* I need all the luck I can get!! :)

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