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SPN RPS fic: Coming Home

Title: Coming Home
Summary: Jared comes home to Jensen.
Pairing: JA/JP
Rating: mild R
Warnings: m/m slash, language, sappiness :)
Disclaimer: I own nothing. JA and JP own themselves. I don’t know them and this is completely fictional, ALL of it. No harm or defamation or profit intended whatsoever. Just borrowing their fantastic personas for creative (fun) writing exercise. My sincere apologies for being a fanfic slut.
Author’s Notes: Written forfluffandfoldchallenge prompt: foot massages. Believe I'm posting this just in the nick of time heh. Unbetaed, kindly let me know (and forgive me) if you see any errors.
Word Count: 2307

Read on ao3

I thought it was very sweet. I liked how Jensen wanted to take care of Jared and was so attentive. And I liked Jared asking Jensen to take him to bed. And the fumbling and stove buzzer and all interfering was so true to life and funny. Yup, sometimes it's not perfect but it's still good anyway. Very nice!

Thanks so much sweetheart! I'm really glad you enjoyed the sappiness and the domesticity :)

There is no such thing as too mushy, not for me anyway. I just loved this sooo much. The way they share and speak without words is perfect. You captured love. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

There is no such thing as too mushy, not for me anyway.
Yayyy, my kinda girl ;)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you liked it hon! :)

OMG! The MUSH! I love it!!! I needed mushy fic...cause there's been FAR too many depressing ones lately! Mushy GOOD!!!

Mush has its moments doesn't it? ;) Thank you so much for reading sweetie. I'm very happy you enjoyed it :)

Mushy is very good here. :) It's very sweet and domestic and loving and sensual. Hand/foot massages are very nice. Mmmm. Lucky lucky Jared. Gets a massage *and* sex. The oven beeps, and Jensen has to go take care of that...very domestic and real. <3 The fic feels like a fluffy warm blanket...its warm and I just wanna wrap myself in it.

Thank you for reading hon. The oven beeps at the most inopportune of times, believe me it's happened to me on more than one occasion and its just.. aargh :D:D

The fic feels like a fluffy warm blanket...its warm and I just wanna wrap myself in it.
Oh wow.. really? God that's the sweetest compliment! Thank you so much sweetie *wraps you in a blanket and hugs you* :)

This is sweet - I adore how clumsy and cute and DORKY they are.

And I think your writing shows a lot of promise. Also I think you probably could use a beta - if you need/ want one in the future and can't find one, email me or drop me a line over at my journal, I'd be delighted, and I think it could help making the most out of what you're writing.

One change I'd make on this one - Jared's shirt that fits him around "the bust"... "the bust" is a female term, it refers to breasts, bosom, rack. Chest is probably better for a bloke :D

thanks for this, I enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon.
Yeah I do make a lot of mistakes when I'm rushing to meet a prompt's deadline! Fixed the "bust" heh.. think I've heard it used in context of statues both male and female.. maybe that's where it came from? *shrugs* I took it out anyway.
Thanks again hon, and maybe I will ping you next time I have a story to post? :) cheers.

Aw, this was very sweet! Gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.

Nicely done.

Thank you sweetie :) Am really glad you liked it!

Yes, of course it was ridiculously mushy, and absolutely PERFECT! *hugs*

:D Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed reading the mush as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

Not mushy at all, quite beautiful, actually!!!

Aren't you glad I took a break from all the angst haha ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon.. I'm glad you liked *hugs* :)

AWWW BOYS!! *melts in the schmoop*

I love how Jensen calls Jared his boy. And the massaging!!


“Take me to bed, Jensen.”

Jensen gazes deep into his smoldering eyes, wondering how the hell did he ever get so goddamn lucky.

“Show me how much you love me?”

*FAINTTHUD*

♥ ♥

Yeah this is schmoopy alright :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing sweetie! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) *hugs*


No, not too mushy....i thought it was a very *down to earth* J2 fic. Just showing that they both have to make time for each other, and even then, when they do, real life (or a pot roast) seeps back in.

I enjoyed reading this, thank you for posting.

Thanks so much for the thoughtful review! Since the comm fluffandfold is all about domesticity, that's exactly what I was aiming for.. to write abt just another day in the lives of the boys :) I'm really happy you enjoyed this hon, cheers :)

“Have I told you lately…”
Jared holds his breath.
“… how ridiculously little you ask for yourself? And how silly that is?”

Oh, Jensen! That was almost cruel.

“Dude… that tickles…”
“Oh I’m sorry baby,” Jensen smiles back not really sorry at all.

He looks up at Jensen, now holding his right calf and kissing the cap of his right knee like it was the most sacred thing in the whole world.

“Sonofabitch, the roast!”
Jared is already splitting his sides when Jensen dashes back out to the kitchen.


Too mushy? NO SUCH THING!

I loved that Jensen can make a foot rub so damn erotic for Jared. He knows his body that well. And the playfulness that shows through makes me love them all the more!

Wonderful job! Thank you.

Alley



Edited at 2008-01-18 08:49 am (UTC)

Awww, thank you so very much Alley :) Your reviews are always so awesome and they totally make my day!!

Too mushy? NO SUCH THING!
LOL. Amen to that!! :) *hugs*

Great story! You did a really nice job on it.

Thanks Tori :) I'm really happy you liked it.

god, do I ever love your writing.

and this? Was so sweet and so perfect. Something that warmed my heart this cold morning ^_^ *wiggles toes* Lucky Jarebear.

*smishes*
<3

god, do I ever love your writing.
*bounces in happiness* Thank you so much!! You've made my whole week :)
Lucky Jarebear alright!! What could be better than have someone you love give you a foot massage at the end of a long, tiring day? *sighs* :) cheers again hon. *hugs*

ohhhh...i like this!!!!....but...ummm....MORE MUSHY SEX PLS!!....lol

:D Thanks for reading sweetie. I figured if I wrote any more mush in one fic.. I'd give my readers diabetes lol! ;)