dorkyTitle: Coming Home
Summary: Jared comes home to Jensen.
Pairing: JA/JP
Rating: mild R
Warnings: m/m slash, language, sappiness :)
Disclaimer: I own nothing. JA and JP own themselves. I don’t know them and this is completely fictional, ALL of it. No harm or defamation or profit intended whatsoever. Just borrowing their fantastic personas for creative (fun) writing exercise. My sincere apologies for being a fanfic slut.
Author’s Notes: Written for
fluffandfoldchallenge prompt: foot massages. Believe I'm posting this just in the nick of time heh. Unbetaed, kindly let me know (and forgive me) if you see any errors.
Word Count: 2307
Summary: Jared comes home to Jensen.
Pairing: JA/JP
Rating: mild R
Warnings: m/m slash, language, sappiness :)
Disclaimer: I own nothing. JA and JP own themselves. I don’t know them and this is completely fictional, ALL of it. No harm or defamation or profit intended whatsoever. Just borrowing their fantastic personas for creative (fun) writing exercise. My sincere apologies for being a fanfic slut.
Author’s Notes: Written for
fluffandfoldchallenge prompt: foot massages. Believe I'm posting this just in the nick of time heh. Unbetaed, kindly let me know (and forgive me) if you see any errors.Word Count: 2307
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Yayyy, my kinda girl ;)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. I'm happy you enjoyed it :)
The fic feels like a fluffy warm blanket...its warm and I just wanna wrap myself in it.
Oh wow.. really? God that's the sweetest compliment! Thank you so much sweetie *wraps you in a blanket and hugs you* :)
And I think your writing shows a lot of promise. Also I think you probably could use a beta - if you need/ want one in the future and can't find one, email me or drop me a line over at my journal, I'd be delighted, and I think it could help making the most out of what you're writing.
One change I'd make on this one - Jared's shirt that fits him around "the bust"... "the bust" is a female term, it refers to breasts, bosom, rack. Chest is probably better for a bloke :D
thanks for this, I enjoyed it.
Yeah I do make a lot of mistakes when I'm rushing to meet a prompt's deadline! Fixed the "bust" heh.. think I've heard it used in context of statues both male and female.. maybe that's where it came from? *shrugs* I took it out anyway.
Thanks again hon, and maybe I will ping you next time I have a story to post? :) cheers.
Nicely done.
I love how Jensen calls Jared his boy. And the massaging!!
“Take me to bed, Jensen.”
Jensen gazes deep into his smoldering eyes, wondering how the hell did he ever get so goddamn lucky.
“Show me how much you love me?”
*FAINTTHUD*
♥ ♥
No, not too mushy....i thought it was a very *down to earth* J2 fic. Just showing that they both have to make time for each other, and even then, when they do, real life (or a pot roast) seeps back in.
I enjoyed reading this, thank you for posting.
Jared holds his breath.
“… how ridiculously little you ask for yourself? And how silly that is?”
Oh, Jensen! That was almost cruel.
“Dude… that tickles…”
“Oh I’m sorry baby,” Jensen smiles back not really sorry at all.
He looks up at Jensen, now holding his right calf and kissing the cap of his right knee like it was the most sacred thing in the whole world.
“Sonofabitch, the roast!”
Jared is already splitting his sides when Jensen dashes back out to the kitchen.
Too mushy? NO SUCH THING!
I loved that Jensen can make a foot rub so damn erotic for Jared. He knows his body that well. And the playfulness that shows through makes me love them all the more!
Wonderful job! Thank you.
Alley
Edited at 2008-01-18 08:49 am (UTC)
Too mushy? NO SUCH THING!
LOL. Amen to that!! :) *hugs*
and this? Was so sweet and so perfect. Something that warmed my heart this cold morning ^_^ *wiggles toes* Lucky Jarebear.
*smishes*
<3
*bounces in happiness* Thank you so much!! You've made my whole week :)
Lucky Jarebear alright!! What could be better than have someone you love give you a foot massage at the end of a long, tiring day? *sighs* :) cheers again hon. *hugs*