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SPN: Sam & Dean "My Everything"
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SPN fic: The penultimate day

Title: The penultimate day
Summary:
Dean’s last year is almost up.
Rating: R
Warnings: m/m slash. Angst, of course.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Not for profit.
Spoilers: S2 finale.
Word Count: 3333 (heh)
Author’s Notes: May 17th, 2007 was the day AHBL-2 aired. Written for bottom_sammy challenge prompt #1.


This allows Dean to live but will eventually kill Sam! And THAT would destroy Dean! The brothers themselves are caught in an endless loop of love for each other, let's face it! Excellent story with a unique premise! Beautifully written, too! Love, Robin

The brothers themselves are caught in an endless loop of love for each other, let's face it!
Wow I didn't think of this, this is a beautiful analogy to their current time-turning situation. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon, your feedback's made me very happy! :)

Oh, this was so good! A brilliant idea, and yeah, once Dean figures it out, there'll be hell to pay (no pun intended). I have to give Sam a lot of credit, though, because living that day over and over again would be horrific. Love the demon sentinels, love the bit about the jacket - love it all. Thanks for sharing, sweetie! :)

Thank YOU my love :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

once Dean figures it out, there'll be hell to pay
Oh yeah. I guess you're also thinking what I'm thinking ;) How quickly we go there don't we LMAO! :D

because living that day over and over again would be horrific.
Yeah I guess it would. But beats living the day after, when Dean would be dead... its such a tragic situation and I'd rather have Kripke work on resolving it. In the meantime I'm just playing in his sandbox of angst heh.

Thank you so much sweetie *hugs* :)

Woah, shit, I liked it, though now I really wanna know if Sam manages to get Dean out of the deal...

Thanks!! I'm really glad you liked it :) Honestly hon I don't want to write it any further and leave it open to readers' interpretation. Think I trust Kripke enough to have HIM deal with it lol ;)

OMG...that might hurt more than if it really were Dean's penultimate day...That was a VERY powerful idea, angsty as hell and I loved it!

Thank you so much for reading and for the awesome feedback hon! I'm really glad and relieved to hear that it works for you :) Angst yeah.. *sighs* I can't seem to write anything without it heh. cheers again hon :)

I didn't even see it coming. I was surprised that Sam had been doing a "Groundhog Day" on Dean. I love that he would do that to spend time with him. Loved it!

:) Thanks for reading hon. He had to do something to keep Dean from dying.. even if its not a permanent fix. Poor boys.. I'm so glad you liked it, cheers! :)

oh i loved that...i was hoping to see a fic where sam is the demon king and uses his powers...and i think it's a cool twist that he gets the day turned back again and again...sort of Groundhog Day Supernatural Style :D but i love the way it's taking a physical toll on sam to keep doing that...great idea!!!

this line totally makes sense when i read it again, and it really hit me then:
Fact he is surprised by how calmly he’s taking it all in. Almost as if he’s done it a few times over. His second last day on earth… Why is he not more worried?

anyway, fantastic job, as always!!!

Yayyy! You did what I was hoping readers would do.. go back and read the first part again to look for clues :D:D I'm really glad it worked. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :)

Dude, this is, wow. I love that Dean's still alive, but I feel so sorry for Sam. Oh the angst!

(I'm guessing that I've missed a few chapters on you Scott/Logan fic, so I'll do my best to read and review them over the next week *g*)

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:D Oh thank you so much hon. I'm glad you liked it :) Angst again I know, heh.

Umm.. on the Scott/Logan fic, I haven't updated in a while, sorry *winces* Think you only missed like one new chapter. But hey let me know what you think! :)

wow, this is awesome. sam will do anything, whatever it takes, to keep dean.

great job.

Yes he will, just as Dean did to save him! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :) Glad you liked.

This just made my heart break.

*hugs* Thank you for reading and reviewing sweetie. You're right.. I have been pretty depressing of late. Should go write that fluffandfold fic of mine now.. that should brighten things up a bit round here ;) cheers hon.

That was so full of emotion, I became quite sniffly. Dean would smack Sam if he ever found out what he was doing for his big brother (although he'd do the same in a similar situation). I've read lots of last day fics and they're all so good - I don't know how the script writers are ever going to improve on these fan fics. This one is certainly up there with the best of them.

Hi sweetie! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) The boys are so tragically in love with each other (and I mean it in the strictest brotherly sense of the word as well) that yeah.. they would do anything for each other but also get really angry if the other risked himself doing it.

I've read lots of last day fics and they're all so good - I don't know how the script writers are ever going to improve on these fan fics.

*sighs* I know there's a lot of good fics out there hon and generally fanfiction is more satisfying than canon itself haha. I doubt Kripke could top all of that.

This one is certainly up there with the best of them.

*blushes* Really? OMG thank you so much sweetie! You're really kind :)

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Vincent!!! OMG thank you SO SO MUCH for reading and letting me know what you think!! I was freaking out 'cause this is my second prompt fic to the bottom_sammy challenge and was really hoping you would like it :)
It is quite an angsty story yeah.. and I'm sorry if it's making you sad so early in the day hon! I just.. couldn't think of a happy thing for a boyking!Sammy story plot *shrugs*.
But thank you so much sweetie.. as always you're a complete sweetheart and so unbelievably nice to me! *hugs you tight* :) If you and I knew each other in real life, my husband would be so jealous 'cause I would hug and kiss you more than I ever do him haha :D


This is really powerful, and beautiful. I think the only way to keep my heart from breaking completely is pretending Sam finds a taker on the 13th try.

Thank you so much for sharing it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. I'm really glad it worked for you :) Is pretty sad I know.. and that's why I kept it open-ended for readers to decide whatever it is think they should or would happen.
Oh alright, I chickened out! :P Didn't wanna write a tragic end and I DON'T know how Kripke intends to avoid it :( So I'll just leave it to the master to do his job and get Dean out of this mess. *snivels*
Anyway, cheers again hon :)

Stunningly well done. And the symbolism of the word count is entirely appropriate to this piece.

I know, the word count is such a weird coincidence haha. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :) Glad you liked..

Very lovely story. I want to know what happens next.

Thank you sweetie! :) Unfortunately I don't plan to continue this. Want to leave it open-ended 'cause I'd rather trust Kripke and his team of writers to come up with an appropriate solution. I'm not going to deal with it, it's too sad *snivels* ;) I'm really glad you read and liked this hon *hugs*

Lovely story...I can see Sam trying to keep this up until he finds a solution. I really like the emotion of Sam trying to figure out what to do while still indulging Dean's wishes. Definately aprove of Dean getting a niggle that something is off but not thinking about it too much. Love your writing!

Thank you!! :) I'm glad you liked it hon. The emotions and angst got away from me.. i was just trying to write groundhog day supernatural style heh ;P cheers hon.