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cyndrarae

Rebelling against Reality since 2003

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cyndrarae

X-men fic: In the Beginning (AU): Chapter 11

Previous chapters: One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven | Eight | Nine | Ten

Logan what? Or what Logan?Collapse )

Hon, I'm running out of compliments! I've been saving this chapter for a rainy day, just read it and I love it so much!! Scott's admission was sad, him tearing up, Logan caring enough to shut up... perfect. And Logan's coda just when I couldn't see them finding common ground was SO perfect!!! Loved it!!!! :D

Thank you hon :) I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying this. There may be a hiatus for awhile tho, what with work getting really bad and all. Sorry sweetie :(

Work getting bad? What happened? Hope everything is alright with you?

Everything's okay yeah! Thanks for asking hon :) But me and my team are working tomorrow *shrugs*.. and maybe Saturday as well :(

Again, you're realizing tantalizing us with this SLOWLY (sigh!) unfolding courtship. Can't wait for the next installment!

:D I know it is slow!! Thank you for your patience hon and for reading and commenting :)

I love this story so very much, I've been looking for one just like it for a long time. The plot is really good and is well written, I can't wait to read more.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :) Glad you're enjoying it so far!

This fic is made of win :) I, however, am made of fail, as I didn't notice til today that this chapter and the previous one had been posted *face palm* Sorry about that hun.

I do love this fic though. And the "confrontation" between the two at the end of this chapter = gold hun, pure gold :D

charlies_dragon

Thank you for reading and for the awesome feedback sweetheart :) Glad you like the conversation the boys are having! They're building a bond and they don't know it yet haha ;)
I know I haven't updated in a while but work is just really really bad right now heh. cheers again hon!

"The breaks screeched as he pulled over"

Brakes.

Again, brilliant strategy on Scott's part, admitting to the lost of his powers while turning it into a direct, visible purpose for Logan to join.

Losing his powers seems to have really affected Scott more than he expected or wanted, as well, no matter how the powers handicapped his vision.

"Like I said I don’t understand it that well myself.”

I'm not convinced that Scott doesn't understand whatever he could about the source of his power, or at least doesn't have all of the information available after testing, as it is another aspect about himself and he's all about control and learning the technical information and limitations of his team, including himself, for better tactical planning.