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SPN fic: Of Hot Showers and Female Intuitions (1/?)


Title: Of Hot Showers and Female Intuitions
Disclaimer: I own nothing and no one. You can keep the OCs too if you want.
Rating: R to NC-17 (PG in this one)
Warnings: Incest, Underage, Slash, mentions of kink
Summary: Sam‘s journey through teenage angst and sexual experimentation leads him to an irrefutable truth… he loves his big brother more than he should.
Pairings: Dean/Sam, Dean/OFC, Sam/OFC, Sam/OMC
Author Notes: Prequel to my story Of fears and nightmares. Actually I started writing this first then ran into a block for awhile.
As always, wrote it because I wanted to read it. But would love to hear what you think about it.

What a vibrant picture you paint us here! It is touching and detailed and colorful yet at the same time somehow heartbreaking. Everything rings so true.

And Dean still looked after him… still fixed his lunch and shampooed his hair and cut it when it got long enough to keep from falling over his eyes. Still pushed him on the swing and helped him finish the puzzle of the Taj Mahal. Read Moby Dick to him at bedtime and reminded him when his favorite TV shows were on if he forgot himself, which was often.
This part struck me, because this is most likely how everything went in canon too. Dean truly was Sam's caretaker in every way that counted to Sam. Dean was his whole world. They were such a symbiotic unit that even after they grew up and Sam left in an attempt to shed it and to become his own man, that they fall back to that bond quickly after reuniting, because it simply is an integral part of the identities of both.

Oh yes. You have me hooked in this verse. :)

Thanks so very much for your kind words! I'm happy you found it believable.
I couldnt possibly agree with you more, Dean to my mind was more father to Sam than John ever was. Even in real life, older siblings can be such bullies one moment and so bloody protective the very next, isn't that amazing?:) Thanks for reading hon, hope to post second chapter soon.

'now that he was eight, Dean hardly ever carried him around anymore and he missed it.'
Awwww! In some years,Sam will carry Dean,lol
I LOVE IT and how you described Sammy's feelings and curiosity about Dean and girls...

Shhhh hon, he doesnt know that yet! :D Let's let him be in hero-worship mode just a little while longer, I kinda like him there lol :) I'm so happy you like the story so far hon, thanks for reviewing!

Aww poor little Sammy.This was so cute! Really liked it. Cant wait to read more.

Loved this part...

“More than you like me?”
That brought him back. Dean looked at his little brother with a confused frown that lasted a few seconds.
“Oh Sammy…”
He put his big hands in the kid’s armpits and lifted him clear of his chair. Held him close as Sam entangled his arms and legs around the older boy, clinging with a ferocity Dean had never felt from him before.
“I’ll always like you more than any girl kid. You’re family. And family always comes first you hear me?”
“I hear you.”

Thanks so very very much!! Will be posting next chapter soon. Wee!chesters are so cute arent they :)

So sweet!
I like how it sticks to canon!Dean and Sam, at least for now ;)

haha yeah, for now :D Thanks for reading and reviewing hon!

AWW! This made me smile so big. *snuggles them both*

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon :) *hugs* Wee!chesters are an absolute joy to write.

Heeeeeee,8 years old Sam is such a cutie!
Love the beginning and I hope you'll update soon:)

Thank you so much hon! I'm working on the second one, hope you're not too disappointed, Sam's going to be older moving forward :D

"Sam‘s journey through teenage angst and sexual experimentation leads him to an irrefutable truth… he loves his big brother more than he should."

You know, this sounds like a good first step in a really interesting journey. I love the way you described that age when we first awaken to the opposite sex and it's like a whole new toy to play with, one that was right in our face all along we just never really saw or understood it before, life is just never the same after that.

Hey there, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad the chapter came out believable. You're absolutely right - life is just never the same after that.. its something we can all relate to, guess thats why it wasnt so tough to put down on paper.
Next up - Sam's own awakening to the opposite sex :) Hope you like that one too.

I love your little Sammy. All wide eyed and confused about the changes in Dean. And I love the way that you wrote Dean through Sam's eyes. How their father was almost peripheral in terms of raising Sam, because Dean took care of everything that was really important to Sam. I can't wait to read more of this.

Thank you so much for reading hon. Planning to write all chapters through Sam's POV. Its sort of easier for me heh ;) Yeah, I imagine Dean must've practically raised Sam because John just wasnt around enough, or so I'd like to believe. Guess its my interpretation of that moment in Devil's Trap where Dean and John(demon) face off and Sam chooses to trust Dean.

this is sooo cute cant wait 2 read MORE!!

(Anonymous)
Sam had a distinct suspicion he was missing something. It became slowly clear to him when he flicked the television on and ghastly images of boys kissing girls and boys doing other unmentionables to girls fired the necessary synapses and joined the dots in his head.
“Eww, gross gross gross!”
Sam switched off the offensive programme and went to work on his thousand piece jigsaw puzzle.

Re: this is sooo cute cant wait 2 read MORE!!

Thank you! *hugs* :) Hope to post next chapter soon.

Sam's POV as Dean grows older rings *so* true - this was a great read (G) And I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes with the two of them.

Hey sweetheart! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) I'm just relieved its come out okay. Do keep reading heh :P
And sorry I'm late on the beta hon.. work's been getting in the way, but I'm finishing it tonight for sure!

This is just so touching. Poor little Sammy's heart is breaking and he doesn't even know it yet.

I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hon. Hope you're not too disappointed with what comes next, the boys are about to grow up pretty fast.

So I'm hooked and I want more!! You wrote so beautifully showing how Dean is Sammy's whole world. The part when Sammy says Esmeralda sounds like asthma ROFLMAO!! :]

Thanks so very much hon!! Yeah, Dean IS Sammy's whole world ;) even if the adult Sam won't admit to it on the show heh *g*

“You like her?”
Dean smiled, getting a glossy far away look in his eyes. “Hell yeah Sammy, I like her very much.”
“More than you like me?”
That brought him back. Dean looked at his little brother with a confused frown that lasted a few seconds.
“Oh Sammy…”
He put his big hands in the kid’s armpits and lifted him clear of his chair. Held him close as Sam entangled his arms and legs around the older boy, clinging with a ferocity Dean had never felt from him before.
“I’ll always like you more than any girl kid. You’re family. And family always comes first you hear me?”
“I hear you.”
“Good.”


Can I just hug them? Because I think you broke me with the cute and with how sad poor Sammy is over how he feels like he's losing his big brother. Just...yeah. I've got love for this 'verse and it's only the first chapter. The next one is coming soon, yes? I can beg and make puppy eyes at you. (I'm not as good at them as Sam obviously but still. It could work.) *nods* Such great moments throughout this, how could you not just love it? ^_^

Awww hon :) I think its absolutely imperative that you hug them!! Sammy is miserable right now but it will get better I promise ;) Thank you so very much for reading, next one coming soon, yeah. *grimace* I'm trying :D

This is awesome. It's very well detailed, and I love the hero worship that Sammy seems to have. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks very much hon :)

Oh! My little heart, she is broken.

The image of wee!Sam dejected at seeing Dean with the girl, struggling to heft up his heavy backpack and plod home...gah. It's both painful and just too adorable for words.

Off to read the other parts now, yay!

Hey there.. I'm so sorry I missed your comment! Just saw it today and umm .. *pleads forgiveness* :D Feedback makes my world go round, I can't believe I did this! *whacks own head*
Thank you for reviewing tho love. I hope you liked the other parts as well..

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